I really like the concept within this poem. Plus it's very concise and doesn't drabble on for eternity. Brilliant.

This is great! I love the format.. good job! And thank you for the review :)

Oh the irony, I wonder why :P

You make every word work hard for you, I especially liked the combination of 'champagne' and 'paper'.

this is really good.

especially the format, makes it interesting to read.

the ending really finishes it up, and gives something to think about.

I have to be honest, this isn't my favorite piece by you. I feel like your descriptions and word choices, which usually shine are just eh here. I also missed the connection between the champagne and the river water, unless that's just me being stupid? But still, I think that could have been made a bit clearer. I do like that ending though. The concept that you've emphasized is a good one if I'm correct in assuming that it's not being artificial and I love the last line because it's so sad, but so true. People don't value realness.

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I like this, the imagry is great.

Keep it up.

I like the unique liquid flavour to this, and you are very adept at this style! :)

This was wonderful. Keep it Up!

I like the clear, concise phrasing of this poem; not a word wasted or misplaced. Also, the hourglass format is somehow visually pleasing.

I really like this one, Anna. It's very straight forward and poignant. Great job!

Your twin _

Kati

in simplicity

exists multiplicity

of complicity

does complexity

require heart's black travesty

of morality?

random syzygy

creates strange destiny,— less

perspicacity

Care, skill, and conviction-this poem like all your work gives me something to think about and creates a scene/picture that I can add detail to easily. The poem gives voice to people who feel out of element with others because they are staying true to who they are.