|Reviews for Nobody Listened|
| Insanity Streak 9/9/10 . chapter 1
I really like the concept within this poem. Plus it's very concise and doesn't drabble on for eternity. Brilliant.
| Le Tranquille 8/21/10 . chapter 1
This is great! I love the format.. good job! And thank you for the review :)
| wo bu ai ni le 8/14/10 . chapter 1
Oh the irony, I wonder why :P
You make every word work hard for you, I especially liked the combination of 'champagne' and 'paper'.
| vanillabean99 6/20/10 . chapter 1
this is really good.
especially the format, makes it interesting to read.
the ending really finishes it up, and gives something to think about.
| simpleplan13 5/15/10 . chapter 1
I have to be honest, this isn't my favorite piece by you. I feel like your descriptions and word choices, which usually shine are just eh here. I also missed the connection between the champagne and the river water, unless that's just me being stupid? But still, I think that could have been made a bit clearer. I do like that ending though. The concept that you've emphasized is a good one if I'm correct in assuming that it's not being artificial and I love the last line because it's so sad, but so true. People don't value realness.
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| Moon-Chaser 5/12/10 . chapter 1
I like this, the imagry is great.
Keep it up.
| Mirabella 5/3/10 . chapter 1
I like the unique liquid flavour to this, and you are very adept at this style! :)
| Random-Idiocity 5/3/10 . chapter 1
This was wonderful. Keep it Up!
| Punslinger 5/3/10 . chapter 1
I like the clear, concise phrasing of this poem; not a word wasted or misplaced. Also, the hourglass format is somehow visually pleasing.
| PetiteLumiere 4/29/10 . chapter 1
I really like this one, Anna. It's very straight forward and poignant. Great job!
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| Manuel Fajar 4/29/10 . chapter 1
require heart's black travesty
creates strange destiny,— less
| nickyO 4/29/10 . chapter 1
Care, skill, and conviction-this poem like all your work gives me something to think about and creates a scene/picture that I can add detail to easily. The poem gives voice to people who feel out of element with others because they are staying true to who they are.