That was a nice story, but sad endings are...well, sad. ):

This was short but very poignant. I could feel the narrator's emotions very strongly despite the length. Heartbreakingly beautiful.

I like the way you didn't bother with names:) Well written!

x

mandy

good job :)

I really like this story! The wording is simple, but you give just enough about the characters, and it's fun to read. You didn't get bogged down in detail. It was really sweet.

And I can SO relate to this, thinking that a guy must be in love with me, thinking that he's "beautiful," being his friend when I want to be more. You touched on that very well. :)

I like the intro for the story; it seems it could make a nice plot.

Keep writing this.

Aww this is actually really good! But really sad i hate sad endings... but still good