|Reviews for Jessica in Refracted Requiem|
| Isca 5/2/10 . chapter 1
"Mouths become stiff cones." This is one of the most beautiful lines I think I've ever read. I'm not kidding. Wow! :D
"Spittle along the side of her acorn-bed." I really like this description; it's very vivid and creative.
"Like the floor when it rolled under my palms." You really are a master of similes.
"And when I breathe something feels heavier." Fascinating.
"Like being saved when you don't want to be." This really hit me hard.
I don't know what to tell you, Juliet. You're an excellent writer. Keep doing what you're doing. :)
| Black Sparrow 5/1/10 . chapter 1
"and I watched the werewolves wander while
my whispers left imprints of fully formed words
on the collected frost of the windowpanes, and
when I breathe something feels heavier."
I love those four lines. The whole poem is beautiful and I love it to pieces. And the last couple of lines moved me.
"but how can you be an angel
when I don't believe in god?"
This is brilliant and I'm totally faving it. Lovely
| YasuRan 5/1/10 . chapter 1
Killer ending ;)