|Reviews for atonement|
| SilentVoices 5/5/10 . chapter 1
I liked your use of alliteration with the 'dusty,' 'devoured,' and 'dark.' Very good piece. :)
| no.peace.los.angeles 5/1/10 . chapter 1
Interesting. Definitely does have mystery to it. I like the use of "devoured" here. Very nice. Keep writing! :)
| nickyO 5/1/10 . chapter 1
Ok, I'm fast becoming a fan of your work. Interesting to contemplate.
| Faithless Juliet 5/1/10 . chapter 1
I liked your use of stump, it makes me think of older, darker things. Good word choice overall though.