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   x Farii 9/15/10 . chapter 1Ahhah! This was a nice, light read xD I liked it (; |
| Wtf-Are-Scrambled-Eggs 9/4/10 . chapter 1 Absolutely AWESOME! :) |
| Hazelnut Romance 8/1/10 . chapter 1 omg. that was way beyond cute! |
| natmarie 7/21/10 . chapter 1 Adorable, simple, sweet and hilarious all rolled into one. Maybe try fleshing it out a bit so that it's not just floating dialogue, though that does allow me to picture everything my own way I guess. Nicely done. |
| I Murder on Impulse 7/21/10 . chapter 1 Man this one's hilarious |
| Slaaty 7/14/10 . chapter 1 TEEHEE. I have a friend who's just like Adrian: he can make almost anything I say perverted. Thankfully, we will never get together because he's practically my brother. Anyways. Although the plot is a little thin, I think you make up for it with the characters. They're well thought out, mostly realistic, and very entertaining. Kudos! :) |
| Katie Valentine 7/14/10 . chapter 1 Adrian is cool, I like his character somehow.. Adorable! LOL. And Elektra is awesome too.. The kinda girl who can hold up on her own.. :D |
| Jhaynee 7/13/10 . chapter 1 I thought this was short and cute. Adrian's character was so funny, the lines were hilarious! I felt it was a little fast, but of course it is a one shot. The ending was perfect! Keep it up :) |
| asianinvasion0530 7/12/10 . chapter 1 Hahahaha wow. Adrian is hilariously disgusting yet lovable anyway. Anyways, great oneshot! ] |
| pandorka42 7/6/10 . chapter 1 You made me laugh out loud at the end. For that, you win two thumbs up. :P -Mags |
| queenjade 6/21/10 . chapter 1 aww wow! i love this! Im really suprised it hasn't gotten more reviews because it sure as hell deserves them :) I love Adrian..I LOVE HIM :D he cracks me up with his lines! and Electras brilliant too. I just wish this story was longer..its soo good :D Deffinatly my favourite one shot(And ive read lots of one shots) The ending was brilliant! it made me laugh :) Keep up the great work ;) Jade xoxo |
| naito-kun 6/10/10 . chapter 1 loved the banter and the chemistry between adrian and electra, excellent stuff ((: |
| Somewhere Over A Rainbow 6/9/10 . chapter 1 This is really good :) I love Adrians character, it is so perfect and I like how he is well developed. |
| Triangle 5/15/10 . chapter 1 I liked it. I loved both of the characters - they're completely different to the type of characters you'd usually get in a story. Incredibly well-developed. Loved it. :) |
| Kyllex 5/10/10 . chapter 1 Ahaha, I loved this. Adrian's comments are hilarious and I like Electra. Their relationship is funny and oh so very cute. (: Nice writing, too, I didn't see any major mistakes. So kudos on that! I'll be adding this to my community. (: |
