Couldn't stop reading. Love this story, it was beautiful. Now, on to the sequel!

I am loving this story. The pacing is great and I already feel really attached to Rose and Ileana. Thank you for writing this!

This was absolutely great. Overall very original story. I rather liked Miss Olga despite her misguided ideas about Rose/Xol. If only some super main-stream authors took a page from your book and actually used their imaginations. Now on to your next story I choose to read.

This was a beautiful ending. It wasn't perfect, but at the same time it was.
Just the fact that they end together holds, and it's cute that Mei, Yu and Kwen remained by her side. Fry was kind of a given, taking I to account that she's Xol's Miss Olga. Somehow, it's right

Battle! Glorious Battle!
That wad an amazing fight, and quite. Bright strategy to stop the hoard from dealing further damage. I do believe that dingy cell which she had the displeasure of staying at now has a new name reserved. Sweet, delightful vengeance! In this case, I guess it's better served blazing hot

*chuckles* I just love that final phrase, and even more the fact that Xol actually answered as Ileana knew she would.
I hate Garrick, possible more than I hate Vlad. The name always reminds me of Tepes, sorry.
Good build up of the story the tension is good and intense, ripe for the final battle, and hopefully, not the last chapter.
I know it's worthless coming from me but still : nice work!

When will they tell Miss Olga and the Prince about Rose?

Wow... Just...wow...
It's intense, the bond is felt through your words.
Marvelous piece, simply amazing...

And hatred, or near-hatred, turns to love.
So all the tension built was just for this moment, which you thoughtfully left as a cliffhanger...
I thank Xol and Xin for granting me no wait.
I swear, I love you deeply as of now, until the next moment in which it turns to hatred because of the story.
Damn, it's a roller coaster, good thing that I love those rides! x3

... I am not liking this, not at all...
One, lies to herself, the other, wallows in pain.
I am not liking this, and I can feel the tears welling...
Don't make me hate you...

I swear, you want to kill me, don't you?
I'm not happy with the progress, not happy at all.
I know it's worthless information at the moment, but I rather express myself than not.
Anger, pure boiling rage that it feels like lava...

Oh Gods, the tension was built for four years, but I believe it's exponential growth began right when Col heard about Ileana.
I bed for a happy ending, and I can do nothing but pray for it ()

Wow, powerful last bit! Viktor does give the impression of power and command, more rooted and firm in his beliefs and determined on his path. Royalty!
I do wonder what he will do...
Also, Xol seems to be taken on her position, but in a caring way at least; I love the way you describe from whom she takes most of the ideas, Ileana and Vladimir, just doing the opposite of what the King would do.
For that matter, you have fun and impeccably humorous bits through out your entire writing; I tend to enjoy me plenty.

Yes, I definetly like Viktor; he's such a sweet boy!
At least with those words, he can believe in her return.
And I must as, I like those surprises! Leader of the pack? Boo-yah!
Thou I must admit, it creeped me out a bit when Miss Olga allowed her true colors to shine. What about her other servants though? She clearly cannot trust them... I'm glad she has at least one person, now that Rose wont be there.
I cannot believe you want them apart, T_T it's not fair ;_;

She has a choice, she could go back to Ileana and take her from there. Right?
I am feeling at a loss, and in pain...
Why is happiness hard to achieve, even in stories?