I really really like this one. The style is very unique and the message that comes hurtling at you when you get to the end is quite a jolt of reality, one that I think everyone can relate to. At least I can relate to. The italics added in bursts of humor while still getting their point across. Lovely little drabble.

This.. is wonderful. Seriously, amazing idea!

'you didn't always get to be the heroine.'

Great work, amazing.

x

HPRK0

aw... this is so sad... poor girl... but I also feel for the guy... it's pretty hard picking sides when not knowing the whole story xD

Grtz Silencia

Oh my goodness that was so SAD! I absolutely LOVED it! It was so true! You can't always expect a happily-ever-after...aw. :( Magnificent job. I like how you've structured the sentences, it makes the flow like a series of flashes, from one scene to another. Fab job!

i am in love! do you mind if i marry this story :)