this.

i can relate completely. love the raw emotion presented in just twelve words. now that's one hell of a hiaku.

kudos to you.

Heh - provocative but it works! Damn relatable xD

Keep writing!

I like this - the determination, like you're a force to be reckoned with and you know it. nice work :)

This is what we call profanity done right.

Keep writing!

i love swearing in poetry. it seems so unethical to me.

like we're supposed to be creating the cookie cutter beauty,

but instead we're twisting it to form a new kind of amazing.

also, i like the frustration in this. nice work.

Provocative, compelling, emotional. Well done.

Oh dear. Do I need to call 007? ;)

I like how to the point this is.

I can relate too.

the 'fucking' really made it for me (:

Nice piece.