|Reviews for Heartache Sockhop|
| simpleplan13 5/16/10 . chapter 1
From the Review Marathon (link in my profile).
I really like this piece. I love how it starts off. "Milkshake ache" is such a great description and an interesting way to phrase it with the internal rhyme. I also like your play on "knocks your socks off" by using pull instead. That's a really interesting change and it makes me wonder how literally you meant it. I also like "coast inward" it's just another great description. The word choices are great and basically I like the whole piece a lot.
| Black Sparrow 5/8/10 . chapter 1
This is cute. :)
| nickyO 5/7/10 . chapter 1