From the Review Marathon (link in my profile).

I really like this piece. I love how it starts off. "Milkshake ache" is such a great description and an interesting way to phrase it with the internal rhyme. I also like your play on "knocks your socks off" by using pull instead. That's a really interesting change and it makes me wonder how literally you meant it. I also like "coast inward" it's just another great description. The word choices are great and basically I like the whole piece a lot.

This is cute. :)

Retro.