|Reviews for Somebody, as in Nobody|
| simpleplan13 5/15/10 . chapter 1
I really like the title and summary for this piece. It really adds to the meaning when you read the actual piece. I think it helped me understand why this person is imagining herself like this.
The line break between such and weight sounded awkward to me. Just forced for the syllable count.
Other than that I really liked the peice. I think the image you create here is really interesting. It's not something I've ever thought of imangining myself as, but it works really well, especially when you add the part about breaking. Also, I like how the you could be anyone. Great job!
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| Black Sparrow 5/8/10 . chapter 1
uah? Would I be correct to interpret this as a self conscious woman's thoughts of herself?
| no.peace.los.angeles 5/7/10 . chapter 1
I like it. There seems to be a lot more to it than just what the haiku says, that physical image of a body as a textbook. Nice. Keep writing! :)
| nickyO 5/7/10 . chapter 1