| Reviews for Beebers |
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simpleplan13 5/15/10 . chapter 1Review Marathon! (link in my profile) I love this piece because I have three cats and I like them a lot. I think your use of the word slumber was a good one. It describes what cats do well. The only thing I didn't like was the last line. I felt like it was kinda boring and expected. More description of the cat or of you might have been better. |
Isca 5/8/10 . chapter 1This haiku is so gentle; it captures this little precious moment in all of its simplicity so well. |
Dante's Disciple 5/8/10 . chapter 1Very sweet, I can imagine the little cat purring blissfully right now :) Nice haiku! |
Black Sparrow 5/8/10 . chapter 1Naww mi pewsk! _ Special kitty - gets a haiku written for it an everything! |
Eternal Skies 5/7/10 . chapter 1aaw, that's so cute i love having cats but only if they've been with me ever since they were young. i can't just love a cat straight away unless i'm the one that nurtured it. |
nickyO 5/7/10 . chapter 1Warm moment captured. |