| Reviews for Choir Boy |
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Heartafire 5/31/10 . chapter 1Lovely haiku! Angelic and wistful. Heart |
Louis Denair 5/10/10 . chapter 1"as they fad away" I love the tricky fad, gives this a lovely tongue-in-cheek flavor. Because the times- they're changing. |
Black Sparrow 5/8/10 . chapter 1I'll assume you mean 'fade' instead of 'fad'. Beautifully written piece :) I love it. |
simpleplan13 5/7/10 . chapter 1Is that last line a typo? Did you mean fade? Fad doesn't seem to make sense there... I like the piece though. I really like the idea of singing to stars before God. That was a nice description. |
nickyO 5/7/10 . chapter 1You poem helps me imagine this chaste little figure. |