that's so awesome!

your poetry is so refreshing to read, there's another feeling to your poems that make me readily wanna read them

the first lines reminded of a song to tie your shoe-laces, guess that's where it comes from but it's totally inventive and ingenious. wish i get those ideas but my muse is cranky-not much of use

loved the beat, it does sound like hip-hop/rap combination

I love the beat/rythm of this! Great job!