|Reviews for Flailing|
| Preposterous 2/14/12 . chapter 4
| punctured.lungs 9/25/11 . chapter 1
| TunglMed 5/27/11 . chapter 4
fantastic! i didn't realise it was the same guy as your other story, lol
| Avery H 7/19/10 . chapter 4
SUNNY MR. FINNIGAN REFERENCE!did i spell reference right?
| theauthor94 7/18/10 . chapter 4
I love him the most!
| Alanisaur 7/16/10 . chapter 4
LoL. So funny. You ended with them saying they get laid and then they high-fiving. Hilarious. :)
| ess3sandra 7/8/10 . chapter 1
the conversation is really good. maybe write in some scenery and feelings, whats going on etc to give it more of an dept. the story is really cutting trought the bulshit, i like it!
| starlightxtears 5/27/10 . chapter 2
The words I got for that recaptcha thing when you log in? 'gayness making' Fitting, yes? :D
The ending was certainly abrupt. I expected it to be a few chapters longer, but oh well. I loved Tyson's 'Jitterbug' line, so epic. And I liked Fitchie's snark and social awkwardness as well. Good story :)
| Kjersti 5/27/10 . chapter 4
Aw, this story is so cute. I love it. :) Good work! :)
| sooner or later its over 5/25/10 . chapter 4
"Jitterbug?" he suggested. "Wake me up before you go-go."
...and it turned out to be "let's get it on"
ha ha ha your song choices were very well picked and added good comedy. i loved the story :)good job
| asianinvasion0530 5/25/10 . chapter 4
Hahahaha hilarious. When Fitchie was like "Let's get it on!" I cracked up. I love how socially awkward she is. ]
| eamane 5/25/10 . chapter 1
This story was pretty awesome! Even if it was short.
I like the way you write. :)
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| FeatherfooD 5/25/10 . chapter 4
Lol, even though it's over now, this was highly entertaining to read. I like it! _
| Raised with Fangs 5/25/10 . chapter 4
haha yeah really really short, anyway its good! id say update but u know..the end...