You got Victorian in there! :)

I loved your summary for this, but your story was pretty damn good too!

I like hetero relationships myself, but this nice little triangle (?) was really good. I loved how he so painstakingly loved her yet she was just a you know what buddy.

I think you captured a good part of our generations relationships lol Well done and Bravo!

This is exceptional, the bitter relationship, so multilayered and true. I really felt so much from this piece, both characters aren't perfect but they're so well captured. Just wonderful, I'm in awe of this. Keep up the good work.

P.S. where are you getting all of your challenges from?

Juliet.