Awwww sooo cute! And I'd definitely be the friend wanting a good book rather than going out haha this was very cute.

hihihi :)

Ah... this story just made me giggle with girlish squeals. Loved it! A bit short though... :(

I want more!

Freaken awesome story! :) I liked it a lot.

Very cute and sweet and entertaining. All of the things that a one shot romance should be! Great job and i loved the last line.

I did not like some of the dialogue as it was too 'oh my god' and yeah. But I do like the thought of how it was meant to be set out.

The last line was a bit weird but it made me smile

this is really cute! I loved it!

Ahaha, the last line was killer-hilarious and cute. As was the story ]

Jake is awesome!XD Love it!

Wow! That was amazingly cute and realistic. The ending is especially cute. Definitely a romance favorite :D

I didn't find anything wrong with this. There may have been a grammar error, but I don't really remember. I don't have anything to complain about.

OMG! I fucking love this story! I can't wait for you to update! I love it! Especially the ending. Can't wait for you to update next! :) Love it!

Lady Cady