|Reviews for All The Broken Dreams|
| Anehalia 8/25/11 . chapter 15
She learned about him finally! :) I am so happy so see that, and I like how you didn't have the expected freak out meltdown. Wonder who is killing all those people.
| purple.y-goodness 8/23/11 . chapter 13
Wow! This is great! I love it!
Updateeeeee soooooonn! ;))
| Brightheart 8/17/11 . chapter 13
really good chapters. love them can't wait for more.
| Anehalia 8/16/11 . chapter 13
Sorry I haven't reviewed until this chapter. I got to tell you, I love this story, and I love your story line. I can't wait to read more, and I'm sorry this review sucks so much. I can't think of much more to say.
| deactivatedaccount101 8/15/11 . chapter 11
Oh Myth... 3
| LadyNecey 8/11/11 . chapter 2
Wow...I wonder what exactly had happened to Abril's mother that made her like that. Not only that I wonder what happened to her father. Did he abandon them or is he dead:/ I can feel Abril's pain... I really hope her mom get's out of the weed and alcohol thing. That really damages a person both mentally and physically...if you get what I mean:/
I feel very sorry for Abril. I hope that in due time that all of her wounds are healed.:/
Hmmm I really want to know what Myth and his parents are... Are the like soul reapers or something. Myth did say that his kind takes life...so why does he want to help her so much. could it be that they're soul matesXDhehehe and I'm so happy to hear that Mythy and Demony aren't a couple:Dhahahaha but rather that he considers her more of a sister:)
Awwwww Myth s concern with what is happening to Abril...cuteXD
Oberon sounds like a name of a powerful and yet evil person...:)
So I guess that whatever happened to Abril is something dark, and menacing!:0 I hope Myth totally helps her.
What does she mean that anyone who finds' out about her life disappears...why do I get this feeling that Abril probably isn't human.
The dream part was sooo cuteeee...well the interactions between Myth and Abril...even though it was so short:Pnevertheless it was still refreshing.
Hmmm Myth's clan is very little since most was killed. I wondered how they were killed. War perhaps? Gaaaa! I really want to know what Myth and the other's are...guess I'll have to keep readingXD
Looking forward to Myth seducing Abril but seriously he can't really expect her to tell him her secrets when she doesn't even know him...:/
oh well onwards to the next chapterAgain hope my review again didn't bore you with its forever longness lol:D
PS This was a nicely written and it's safe to say that I spotted no grammatical nor spelling errors. So keep up the great work my friend I absolutely enjoyed this chapterXD
| Brightheart 8/7/11 . chapter 8
want to read more. can't wait.
| deactivatedaccount101 8/7/11 . chapter 7
NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE3
| Anehalia 8/4/11 . chapter 8
By twisty I mean your characters are stereotype looking characters, but you don't write the stereotype, you change things up. That is part of why I like this story so much. Stories don't have to be full of mysteries to be twisty and awesome. And though some small details are easy to predict (like Abril ending up with Myth) a lot of other details aren't, and it isn't your typical romance story.
I enjoyed this chapter, and the interesting switch from trying to push Myth off to finally starting to accept him. (Twisty ;) )
I didn't find anything really wrong except the fact that Abril switch felt kind of sudden and unexplained, but I guess she was having trouble resisting what she felt already...
| Sonia VanDyke 8/2/11 . chapter 2
L.O.V.E. THIS STORYYYY :) 3
| Anehalia 8/2/11 . chapter 7
I found this story in another author's favorites, and I have really enjoyed reading it. Its s different, and so twisty that its really interesting, and its actually well written (half the stories on fiction press aren't). Its nice to find the rare treat of a good story.
| deactivatedaccount101 7/31/11 . chapter 6
Oh how I love your writing. 3
| Northfacegrl5 7/31/11 . chapter 6
Demony you'e so annoying! can't you just find some self respect and accept the rejection?
| Northfacegrl5 7/27/11 . chapter 5
Push him away Abril!
| Charlee Rayne 7/27/11 . chapter 5