Nice chapter, Carley! Well, at least the found you in the forest which was fast.

I wonder how the others are going to find me?

Keep going! This is getting good!

Nice chapter. To the point, dramatic and sweet at the same time. I didn't know Jen could turn into a dragon like that. That's new to me.

I wonder how Ogre Child and Jen met you when you first found that your kingdom's living and breathing the way it is now.

Keep going! This is getting good!

Nice chapter, Carley! So, that's how the two met. I wonder who Ogre Child was able to make Jen become a good guy and out of Naila's clutches?

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Keep going! This is getting good!

Nice chapter, Carley! I wonder how things will turn out for her now that she has to protect Aria?

Keep going! This is getting good!