|Reviews for Stars and Love|
| simpleplan13 5/14/10 . chapter 1
Another one from the Review Marathon (link in my profile).
I really like the personification here of both heaven and the stars, it's really sweet. I also like the idea that heaven would need make up. It's a contradiction to the idea that heaven is perfection which is such a cliche. The only thing is the middle line sounds odd. Why do you use touches and then save? Isn't the subject for both Heaven?
| nickyO 5/12/10 . chapter 1
| Black Sparrow 5/11/10 . chapter 1
naww that's really sweet :) I love it. _