The story was well kept together and very discriptive for size of it, and I liked siting of it. The only problem I had was I forseen a Drug related ending after he passed into another world, but for most part it was perfect.I have to say this was a really good and trippy read.

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Weird and good. I liked you referring to a cigarette as a 'cancer stick' at one point, even though it's a pretty common term. I hate cigarettes. the smell of the smoke makes me sick, no matter how faint it is.