Whyyyyyyyyyy?!
Please continue!
I'm BEGGGING YOUUUUUUUU!
*cries in the corner*

Oh, no revolutionizing for me, i'm to damn caught up in being a lazy ass specimen of a human fat container. This was a pretty good story even if you didn't really have your heart in it and I think this will be at the top of the stuff I read for the sake of random for sometime to come.

Aw, I'm so sad. It was great while it lasted. I hope you find it in your heart to one day rewrite this story or at least base another one off of this one. In any case, good luck and I hope you are able to write more cohesive stories in the future.

By the way:
0. That is obvious, obviously.
1. I KNEW IT. I so totally knew it.
2. Awesome.
3. -?
4. AS;DLKFJAL;KSDJROIAUDKJSFHUWAEIOEK
5. Whew, that was a close call.
6. So she never turns into Megan Fox? Darn.
7. But Teague...
8. Eh, maybe they are for each other.
9. That... makes a LOT of sense.
10. Of course...
11. Heheheh.
12. Of course.
13. Woot-whoop!
14. Cool.
Wait, so does Teague end up with Erika?
Anyway, time to revolutionize the world!

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I JUST READ THIS FREAKING STORY IN ONE NIGHT. IT'S 2:30am AND O DISCOVER IT IS DISCONTINUED. Yeah, I'm really unobservant. I didn't notice the title ending in DISCONTINUED. I am depressed. I was enjoying this. If you decide to continue this one day when you're incredibly bored(please do) THEN DO SO! *goes and sulks in Fisher's pessimist corner*

Dragonluvva

Well from the sounds of things, this will hopefully stay just as good as it started!

...
...
...
It's over.
As a reader, I'm p***ed off, but as an author I can understand.
Well, thanks.
You made me laugh, you made me (almost but not quite) cry.
So, Thank you.
On a more shameless note, could you please read my story Sword and Shield? I haven't gotten many reviews and I'd like to hear your opinion.
Goodbye and once again, thank you.
Swordy

I DEMAND YOU GO WORK ON THAT OTHER STORY RIGHT NOW, OR I SHALL CRY A FLOOD AND DROWN YOU IN YOUR HOUSE. THEN WHEN YOUR IN YOUR DEATH BED, I WILL PUT THAT WHORE IN YOUR COFFIN.

YOU WIL! BE BURIED TOGETHER.

FOREVER.

No, I'm kiding(kindof)and I just want to say I loved it while it lasted. I do love reading your humor stories, and I can't wait for your new one x3

I have spent this entire day doing nothing but reading this story, and ignoring my sister screaming bloody murder at me unless I get up and do something. I am proud to say, I do not regret it. This is one of the best things I have ever read and I spent most of the time laughing like a retard and having numerous family members check in on me to ensure I wasn't having some sort of spastic seizure. And then... I looked at the last updated bit.

I would profusely insult you before breaking down into tears, but this is coming from someone who hasn't been on fictionpress for over a year... BUT THAT IS STILL NO EXCUSE. All the same, I won't kill you because that would be pointless. However, you better not take too long or I will turn into a very angry vegetable. If you thought fat hormonal teenage girls shape shifting into leopards was scary, you clearly have not seen my ball of rolling muffin rage packed inside the hamburger of wrath. Be warned.

Still, I loved this and you're awesome. Yay for insults and compliments.

Muffins XD

well no hoping for freakishly-hot-megan-fox-look-alike-babe-guy-magne t-sexy-ho, because i for some reason distinctly hate megan fox. haven't got round to figuring out why yet
but anyway
loving this!

XD
im owwt

Why you no Update? I's knows i's behind on my emails but I's all caught up now. *nudge nudge* :D

ok well im just halfway through, but i just wanted to say that i really enjoy reading this story :] i could be having such a bad day so i just pull it out and read it and it makes me smile :D

It has been a while since you have written anything on this story. Whee you going to continue or not?

You have taken us from laughter to sad and now concerned and mad. At the end I hope that the characters and you come together in whatever way that your devious mind dictates. I will be going elsewhere to read but will keep an eye out for any updates that you do.

Everyone has a "hard day".

The other day I kinda got excited when I saw that you updated, but then I realized that I already read this part on Wattpad. Wah. So, like, write more, and update!

Also this story has over 200 reviews! Yay!