This is a really interesting poem :) I like the simplicity of your language and the meaning behind it. However, I would rearrange the stanzas differently, as you've broken up some sentances this way.

I really like the way you started this poem. You had a good rhyming pattern established with the 1st 3 lines and then kinda let it go, and used it again at the very end.

Also, I really do like the message behind this work and I think every person has been there before.

oh my gosh...that is so true, i think that way too :)