NOOOOOOOO NO NO NO THIS CAN'T BE HAPPENING :( I DONT WANT THIS TO HAPPEN ITS NOT FARE :( PLEASE UP DATE AND NOW I HATE NATALIE JOSH I GET THE POINT OF WHY AND LEON I GET TOO THOUGH NATALIE IS JUST A B**** PLEASE UPDATE :(

I think that my heart just crumbled into thousands of little tiny pieces. You need to update asap!

That was just a very sad chapter... This is probably why criminals don't easily change.. their past haunts them and forces them to act the way they do.. not that Kyle is a criminal.. but he does have a violent history

This is such a good story , please update! :)

next chapter please.

I love this story! 3 i can't wait till your next update :3

oh no! cliffie! what happened? who was there?ahh! i am filled wih curiosity! update soon! .

:O It's his dad isn't it? Maybe Leon, Roxy? A new character? Can't wait to find out :D

It's Leon isn't it! He told her that Kyle told him!

I love that they're finally together. Epic chapter

Leon? Roxy? whooooooo?

nice! :) keep going!

Great chapter the start was really really nice and happy and lovey dovey though the last little bit scared me I hope that things are alright or become ok again

FINALLY! I'm so bloody happy to see an update! It's progressing very nicely and you're doing a great job with Kyle's characterization. I feel like he's going to change Natalie, and not in a good way. She had her first drink with him and I just get the feeling that she might lose her innocence the longer she stays with him. Unless Kyle changes first, of course. By the way, HOW COULD YOU LEAVE IT AT THAT? When I read the italicized part, I got the feeling that he cheated on her. But reading the last few sentences, I'm beginning to think that maybe good ol' Roxy blackmailed him. I wouldn't put it past her...Thanks a bunch Arrisa! Hope to see an update from you soon!

oh this is just absolutely adorable! update soon :)