I thought it was pretty good you could have even taken it farther like the pharoah caught wind of a golden haired boy having children no less
You gave no description of the children, like if they had the same golden hair as his 'mom '
Bur great job.

Pretty good! I liked it!

Liked it, very nice, you should definitely write more mpreg stories, you make it believable.

hm It is REALLY good. I love the story line although I think you could have made it MUCH longer. Also more detailed in certain areas. But all in all its a really good story and delightful to read. You did a really good job!

It's a nice story :) " I silently promised him it would be a long time till he was allowed to take me again. He winced visibly." lol

I really liked this and it was really sweet and cute especially at the end and you should trying to write more fanfics involving mpreg

This is good! You should defidently write more stories like this one!

This was such a sweet and adorable story...brings tears to my eyes *sniff* lol *wipes eyes* so nice... *bawls* anyways really awesome lovely yaoi-ness and fluffyiness luved it!

This was a really amazing story and I definately enjoyed reading it! Shu and Aymen are so cute together! O

Aw how cute! It was very fluffy!

D Me like!

Uwah So cute!

A thief, to care so much for a slave.

Mpreg, my favourite.

this was adorable.

Aww...this is certainly really cute.

I can't believe it don't have any review at all.