Reviews for The Voice In My Head
let them eat words 6/24/12 . chapter 1
I have few words to describe this EPICNESS.

But this did remind me of one of my friends... seriously, it did. She's really tough and confident (while I'm kinda the opposite), but sometimes she picks on my other friends :( She also taunts me constantly, but never really means it. I copy her sometimes, because I kind of look up to her for courage, but she and some of her friends call me a "minion" for it. I laugh it off, but sometimes... I feel a little embaressed for being such a doormat. Of course, she calls herself a jerk, but (as far as I know) never cares enough to change that.

If I never did see her again, though, I would be sad. She's really witty and hilarious, but also harsh on occasion.

Back to my point, I have few words to describe this EPICNESS. (Except for my wordy flashback I just had XD)
Gilt 10/31/11 . chapter 1
I like this, I really do, but it's more for personal reasons than literary ones. AKA make this part of a story, or try to build something from it, and it would be even better IMO. Ah, then again, I'm more of a prose type of person rather than poetry, and I prefer making characters say things instead of saying them myself. More powerful in a sense... Anyway, pretty good stuff, you nailed it
yuanyuan 6/3/10 . chapter 1
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lili999 5/31/10 . chapter 1
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