it's really good don't call your poems bad

Omg, I am very oblivious to a lot of things & the way you used that word stood out to me... you have so much potential & your one of the greatest authors I've seen today.

Continue to write!

I'll be your #1 fan xD

-InfinitePrincessx3

Brilliant imagery. The eagle line was a little cliche, but otherwise a great poem.