Cool story. Cute and amusing

I don't know what to say about this story. Even though he seems like the kind of guy that I despise, I can't help but smile at him. Maybe inside me, I just know that he will take care of her. I really like the way you wrote this story. I can totally picture a guy saying/thinking all these things.

xoxo,
JustWish

Haha, denial much? This was cute. .

oh my gosh! i'm gushing! so cute and adorable! I love it!

p.s i do realize how many xclamation marks i've used, but ... i've got an excuse!...right?right?
I mean this IS one of THE sweetest FP stories I've ever read!

Yeah right. Tell that to yourself LOL :)

Nice story! I love it!

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww dis is uber cute .ha ! i love it he is sooooooooooooo possesive;) great one

I find this cute, even if he is being kind of mean. He's in denial! It's adorable. I don't know what else to say except that I really liked this and I'm glad he's getting with her. He definitely gets jealous haha.

This oneshot got me giggling and laughing and squealing like a rabid fangirl that i am. I'd love a sequel or something to it but this is just perfect the way it is. MORE PLEASEEE!

Just 772 words, but you had me smiling all the way through :)

Loved it!

This story was so different! I liked it a lot. It was really good. Admitting that you like someone in denial, who would have thought? It's awesomely written!

Cheers! :D

LOL what in the world? ...sounds like the perfect way to ask a girl out to me XD

This is sooo incredibly adorable. I loved every bit of it. I love his denial and that he's listing all of her traits and acting like he doesn't find them cute. xDD

This is very well written. It's got a great flow and no grammatical/spelling/punctuation errors really jumped out at me. Of course, that could be because I was so absorbed in the writing that I didn't notice anyway. But we will just say it's because there were none. I didn't really check if you had any other stories, but if so, I will definitely be taking a look at them. I added this to my Favorite Stories as well.

In short. Great job!

Despite being around 700 words, this story managed to put a massive smile on my face. I don't know how you did it, but you summed up a lovely, cliché romance in probably only about half the words of one chapter of another story with the same plot.

But to be honest, it was probably better than the others. It was so simple, so sweet, so realistic that it makes is absolutely breathtaking.

This story deserves more love, it's amazing and I thoroughly enjoyed it! :-)

Hey there! Your story has been added to the website A Drop of Romeo, which reviews popular stories on FP. I'm a judge for the one-shot category, so here's your review:

First impression: How is this romance? It's mean, it's harsh, it's brutally honest, it's what love really is. The main character (a guy, for once) describes his girl as a 6.450903 on a scale of 1-10 on a good day, and he could pull an 11. He lists all her faults, every single thing he doesn't like about her, and you still get the feeling that he's crazy about her. This is the type of story I love: one that isn't perfect, or nice, or always cute. It contains heart and feeling and real people. There was so much denial, it got a bit unrealistic at one time or another. Under 800 words, You're Not My Type is a light, fluffy-to-the-max read that (I think) can make any girl feel more hopeful about getting the guy. And, though it was relatively plot-less, the moral was clear: If it feels right, go for it.

Oh, my, gosh. A guy /indenial/? That's the most adorable thing I've ever came across in my whole existence!