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Guest 10/10/12 . chapter 1 wow so stupid |
greenforests 6/7/10 . chapter 1this was quirky in the way you raise your eyebrows at someone who is sneaking glances at you. I like it. |
the sun softly smiles 5/20/10 . chapter 1I'm not sure, either; but it's cheeky and I like it. particularly the "co / hesive" for some reason or another. |
nevermore199 5/19/10 . chapter 1This is beautiful. And it sounds so much like you. |
i think that maybe 5/18/10 . chapter 1pft. yeah, it's official- you're friggin amazing. you are like everything i love and love to hate if that makes any sense. "you want" period. break. "flow." complete bitch-assness. that's all this can be summed to. i smiled hardcore. twist your eyebrows line was beautiful and unique and just soveryyou. "i smirk. at you." fav lines i've read on fp since i've been back. hands down. i don't think it's coming across cohesively (ironic enough) but this kinda made my day so far. (i'm not sure either, but i'm fucking psyched that you're back.) |