Reviews for plausible plot development
Guest 10/10/12 . chapter 1
wow so stupid
greenforests 6/7/10 . chapter 1
this was quirky in the way you raise your eyebrows at someone who is sneaking glances at you. I like it.
the sun softly smiles 5/20/10 . chapter 1
I'm not sure, either; but it's cheeky and I like it. particularly the "co / hesive" for some reason or another.
nevermore199 5/19/10 . chapter 1
This is beautiful. And it sounds so much like you.
i think that maybe 5/18/10 . chapter 1
pft. yeah, it's official-

you're friggin amazing.

you are like everything i love and love to hate if that makes any sense.

"you want" period. break. "flow."

complete bitch-assness. that's all this can be summed to. i smiled hardcore.

twist your eyebrows line was beautiful and unique and just soveryyou.

"i smirk.

at you."

fav lines i've read on fp since i've been back. hands down.

i don't think it's coming across cohesively (ironic enough) but this kinda made my day so far. (i'm not sure either, but i'm fucking psyched that you're back.)