I loved this story! I think i read the first chapter and i couldn't stop so i spent the better part of 2 days reading it. I can't wait for the next bit to come! I loved Adrians character and how even at the end he was still himself but willing to let people in and treat Cassidy the way she should be treated. Just lovely.

I have thoroughly enjoyed this story and I am glad that Cassidy is not leaving. I was surprised to find out that her father was not really going to send her away. He seemed quite serious about it. I guess what I'm trying to get at is that I really hate people who lie in order to punish someone. What's so wrong with just telling them what they really think and feel? But I'm glad that you had Cassidy say that the only thing her father taught her was that she could no longer trust him because that is the truth.

Onto other things, I thought the pacing throughout the story was good and I'm glad they are finally together although there were times that I didn't think they would actually make it.

Good job!

LOVE this story.

Seriously Adrian & Cass are awesome.

L

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Awww shucks! i love this chapter! its sooo beautiful :) thanks for the update! can't wait for the epilogue! you're awesome!

thanks for the update! they're together! (jumps of joy) cannot wait for the epilogue

Well, this was an especially delicious chapter.

I LOVE ADRIAN SO MUCH! YOU DON'T KNOW HOW HAPPY THIS MAKES ME! WHEEEEE!

Good. Now that I have that out of my system, I'd like to congratulate on a job well done. I hope you're not going to end it soon - cuz that'd bum me out exponentially, but if you do, I'd like you to know that I thoroughly enjoyed your entire story start to finish. It's been a pleasure to read.

-MDX

i m glad tat everyting turns out well in the end. is the story coming to an end?

I just started reading your story, and I have to say that you're an amazing writer. It's so funny and the chemistry between these two is getting good. Cassidy annoys me sometimes with her naviety but I getting use to seeing it as a funny qurik in her character. I can't wait to see what happens next!

This was my favourite bit:

She went to slap his shoulder, but Adrian got it in his hand, intertwining their fingers. He kissed her fingers and brought her closer, smiling.

"I like that you're not leaving."

Cassidy smiled back. "I like that I'm not leaving too."

:] can't wait for the final chapter!

oh thank gosh! Cassidy and Adrain hell yeaaa! It did take u foreva to post this but it was worth it. I cant beleive its almost over! I truly love this story.

Thank you 4 updating! ;p

I'm so happy they finally together!

can't wait for the epilogue! )))

i soo agree! i liked the older one better...anyways i was soooo happy wen u updated, loved d chapter...it was an awsum story... cant wait for the epilogue...

love u, and

thnx...

omgg. I was TOTALLY wondering where you were. I'm checking my email and after a few weeks I'm like "hmm, I'm pretty sure I usually get an update around now for EMA..." but I can assure you I was equally thrilled as ever to see it in my inbox last night! D GAH! One more update? Nooooooo. I don't want it to come cause I don't want the story to end, but bring it on I guess. I hope you start a new one up again soon!;D Summer is coming you know, less stress with school and all that jazz *hinthintwinkwink* lol. I'll save my farewell and overall review for the last update I guess.../ But there is no rush. Long and juicy works out LOVELYYY for meD ahahaha.

Whelp, I am glad to hear you are feeling better and the writer block is currently gone. Hopefully it won't return anytime soon. So I guess you can stop reading this and get your lovely writing juices flowing and onto Word so we can all read your magic. But ps, I'd TOTALLY purchase your books if you ever decide to be an author]

That was so awesome an ending and I thought for one Cassidy was actually leaving. You're so evil for making me curse at her dad. Anyways awesome story. I love it! Adrian is what I would call now a reformed rake ha ha ha ha ha XD

OHMAHHGAWD. THAT WAS SOO CUTE! AHDORABLEEEE, razzmahtazz, I hearttt the new Adrian ;) (Not really new, but I think you understand!)