I really liked this, I'm not (no matter how much I want to) going to say I love it, because it's too real life and relateable to be something you can love, no matter how well written it is.

I love your writing so much. Everything is so beautiful and natural. You're a wonderful writer. I know it, because you make me want to cry and smile and break all at once. When I get that reaction, I know you deserve praise in every way.

I love this. It's very real.

Wonderful poem.

"I dreamt of being one of those fucked up girls who don't need anybody, anybody to save them (but someone will come along who will know that they do)." That's me: the girl who takes care of herself but secretly wants to be saved. This was a very relatable piece. Keep up the good work.

i dreamt of being one of those girls, too.

unfortunately, i'm still dreaming about it.

fantasy-no matter what kind-is always better

than reality.

i loved this.

Wow! This is definitely an amazing piece, I love it! And I can relate to it a bit too. You're a very talented writer :3