|Reviews for My Last Goodbye for Anyone Who Cares to Listen|
| Stormfeather 11/5/11 . chapter 1
the 'took' in the second verse should have been 'taken', but that's the only thing I can find. This is wonderful, my favorite part is the chorus- 'This is my final chapter, This is my last goodbye, Sung to all the masses That have yet to see me cry.'
| I-Breached-UR-Security 5/21/10 . chapter 1
this was good. :) except in the first line of the second verse it should have been "taken" not "took." other than that, perfect.