Ho hum diddly dum, very nice. You've some good choice of wording in this, and it brings out some great alliteration here and there. Love your last five lines.

This one is pretty cryptic. I like it. I wonder if this is a political rant. What women talk about when they are PMSy?

mm i want to tell you why i like this poem but it is late so i will just say

nice work.