"Coffins on eyeballs." Well, damn. What a suave line. It reminded me of Dia de los Muertos.

I really liked the first description "words on paper." That was a really great image for me about how people's thoughts/statements get written. The rest was kinda bit too abstract for me personally...I didn't really get it.

Kinda scary ;)

I love the idea of pasting voices.

It carried me over right into

coffins on eyeballs.

Great work.

Ayx

Whoa um that was different. Pretty cool and a little creepy, haha great job :)

It's a story all in itself. Again, as is always the case with you. Well done.