I'm a bit lost with the title... is it someone's name? I dunno it kinda confused me about how it related to the piece.

Anyway... I liked the piece. The first two parts were just sort of okay. They were sweet, but it was the last line that really made it great. I think it was a really good statement. Very true, but vague enough that readers can take it many ways. I do kinda wish you hadn't used it as the summary though 'cause it kinda killed the build up to that line for me.

Has a personal quality to it that leaves the reader imagining the people involved.

Sweet love. Nice job :)

*wants to have an illicit affair with your summary*

*faves*