This one has a chilling delivery and I appreciate stories like this. It's not common to mix a spiritual feel with a Horror story, especially one that has the family sub-tag behind it. You captured a real sense of horror with this story and it shows with it. If you're looking to have this story published, let me know. I do run a magazine called The Ethereal Gazette and I am always looking to publish new talent all the time with the magazine or with the anthology I am putting together. I would be honored to run this story if you want it published.

I loved the story and couldnt stop reading it! Although I have to admit I expected something different. I expected something...religious...or a different ending. I definately thought she was going to kill him or something, but she just left and she has two kids so I definately wasnt expecting it and it left me hanging about what happens next so I'm hoping you will write more as I'd like to know! Ive recently published a piece called prayer and I would love if you can review it for me! Its only the first chapter of many to come, but I would really like the feedback! Thanks