I love this idea/ world...

And the plot thickens! Good descriptions, and I like all of the little 'hints' (foreshadowing, maybe?)about the past. Great chapter, I'm wondering if they're going to 'keep' the Downer or not... hmm...

I like how some things are explained but some still left mysterious ('the mistake'?) Awesome!

Oh, this is interesting! I like the description of the Downer (his voice is like a melody, the way his wings were bent). :)

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