|Reviews for Apple Bottom Academy Edited|
| Sweet.Linda 8/6/11 . chapter 17
Gavin and Kairi are super duper ah-dorable. 333 But poor Jason. :(
Also, Vivian is so... evil. It's awesome! :')
Oh, and everyone else was adorable, too. Like, Izzy, and Aaron & Brie. And, woot! Daphne's all better. (H)
By the way... this chapter was, like, amazingly written. It sounded so... professional, I guess. :)
Keep up the amazing work ! x)
| Leafarrow 8/6/11 . chapter 5
I'm leaving a review to tell you that I liked this chapter :P
I like how you've given the characters such distinct personalities, and I love the pixies :D
| Stef 8/3/11 . chapter 16
Omg that chapte was so gooooood and :o did aaron give brie blood? Thats so coooool lol and epic but yeah this was amazing
| Sweet.Linda 7/22/11 . chapter 16
OMGOSH! Poor Gavin! I really do hope Kairi can make him feel better again. But, I feel bad for Jason now, too. But... gaaah. They're both amazing!
And, YAY! Daphne's feeling better again! And Kairi's catching onto the twin thing! :)
This chapter was kind of confusing, but amazing nonetheless. Update soon, please! ;D
| Phoenix.Secrets 7/21/11 . chapter 16
ALL I HAVE TO SAY IS:
| Sweet.Linda 7/11/11 . chapter 15
KAT, I LOVE YOU FOR PUTTING THAT PART WITH GAVIN & KAIRI. THAT TOTALLY MADE MY DAY. ;D
And, yaaay! They're FINALLY figuring out that they're twins. :)
Amazing chapter, as per usual. Keep it up. x)
| Phoenix.Secrets 7/10/11 . chapter 15
Lily's POV: LAWLS AWESOME
Izzy's POV: The fluff was cute! And the pep rally was so short! D:
Kairi's POV: WUUUUUUUUUUUUTTTTTTTTTT?
Gavin's POV: AGAIN! WUUUUUUUTTTTTTTTTT?
Jason's POV: ONCE A AGAIN: WUUUUUUUUUTTTTTTTTTT?
Happy writing :D
| stef 7/10/11 . chapter 15
omggg izzy and seth kya kyaaaa kyaaaaa 33333333
also... since daph is a vampire... :S if shes not being given blood wouldn't she be.. hypothetically starving to death?
IZZY'S GOING TO BE IN SETHS CLASS HUR HUR HUR
| Sweet.Linda 6/25/11 . chapter 14
"No! Brie, I said, do not eat that tree branch!"
LMAOLMAOLMAO. TOTALLY MADE MY DAY.
I loved Kairi and Izzy's point of views; they were hilarious. :')
And, vampire-Daph & -Brie are... epic. xD
This chapter was ah-flippen'mazing, as usual. :)
| Phoenix.Secrets 6/20/11 . chapter 14
Whoa long chapter was long but very very very very very very very awesome. I loveeddd it. Kairi was my favourite! xD
Write more soon! 3
| stef 6/20/11 . chapter 14
HAHAH TAKE THAT LENA MBWAHHAHAHHAHAH
and LOLOLOLOL aiden LMFAO LMFAO.
DJFHSUDFH LILY WTF SHE ALMOST GOT RAPED WHUT OAO.
OMG KAIRI'S PARENTS 3 OMG BRIE omggg daphnee D: why doesn't he give a necklace to daphne tooo!
| xHopeless Romanticx 6/8/11 . chapter 13
I love this story! The plot is very intriguing especially with Vivian and Brie. I like the romance among the mystery. I can't wait for more!
| stef 6/4/11 . chapter 13
OMG I DROPPED AIDEN OUT THE .
DOSKGHIUDHG ARE U FINALLY GUNNA MAEK THEM FIND OUT THEY'RE VAMPIRES :O?
:O AND U ADDED VIRE'S STORY INTO IT 3 OMGGGG
AND OMG ITS SO GOOD JUST FFFFFF 3
| Sweet.Linda 6/3/11 . chapter 13
Yaaay, it's Daph's birthday now! I love how they planned a whole surprise for her. And, IZZY'S POINT OF VIEW. LMAO. I. HEART. IT. 3
Update soon, please! :)
| LittleMissAnonymous 5/27/11 . chapter 12
I really like this story. I like the way you put a lot of detail into the world and you put attention into small things like slang and the like. My one problem with the story is well, not really, but I find it rather hard to follow the amount of characters you've put into the story. Don't take me wrong, it's an awesome story, but I've always had this problem with reading stories with too many characters. Maybe you could explain some more in an AN?