|Reviews for disappoint|
| HiddenFromYou 11/28/10 . chapter 1
I liked the rhyming scheme here because it was strong and stayed consistent throughout, without sounding forced. I do, however, want to suggest that you try using capital letter, etc, maybe for just one poem to see how it goes because I'd be interested as to how your style would adapt.
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| mr mahler 5/30/10 . chapter 1
beautiful words...sat and contemplated this poem for 20mins,your work is amazing so you must be,even a blind man could see that...very good thanks