|Reviews for Numerology|
| Open your eyes Chopstick 6/3/10 . chapter 1
um... it was interesting. you sort of ended it really settled though. Shouldn't you try to amp up the "oh my gosh, what's going to happen?" feeling? So the readers would want to read the next chapter? Other than that, it looks good. The King and Queen sound like the typical royal family, and Eric and Andy is normal teenagers. But with the magic...i'm sure it'll get interesting in later chapters. I can't wait!
Um...also, do you mind R&R-ing my stories/poems? It'll help alot, since I'm new to the site. Thank you! (just clicky my name)