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This was a really cute story and I love the characters. There were a few spelling mistakes and you mixed Julia's name up with someone named Alice. I also wish you would have focused a bit more on the whole ice cream deal, because that was a cool idea for a story. Other than those few things, the story was really enjoyable and well written. I hope you write more stories like this. Good job.

Hehe, I read this all really quick and I must say I think this is SO cute.

The only thing that was meh was that sometimes I was a bit confused as who was saying what, lol. Probably the way you structured your dialog or something.

But other than that, cute! :3

Aww a happy ending! :) I liked this story, it was very cute

*sigh* I miss the happier times! lol although I know it would be boring if everything was always happy..

Love the title :D

I haven't read the story yet, I'm only halfway through the first chapter but out of curiosity I looked at your profile and I saw this quote:

Love is watching someone die.

I recognise that as part of a song called What Sarah Said, and it's sung by Death Cab for Cutie so you might as well cite them as the authors.

Hm, a little more errors in this chapter but I'm too lazy to point them all out 3 Can't believe Scott hit her though! Still, cute scenes with Julia and Matt ;)

Cute, funny, romantic - what more could a girl want? Can't wait for the next chapter.

This would make a great movie :) I can picture every scene so clearly

Awh! I love it already XD Matt and Julia remind me of someone...I just have no idea who :

this is a very good story and you could become a writer, writing the most amazing romantic stories where guys could learn how a girl should be treated. cant wait to read more! write faster ;)

sincerely,

lulu

aww how cute! :)

update soon

great chapter!

Really good story! I love the ice-cream idea. Please continue!

This story is just adorable :)