omg I sang this. :D i love it!

sorry, this isn't my computer so I don't exactly want to sign in unless I absolutely have to (mostly because I don't remember my password 'cause firefox usually remembers it for me XP).

I think the reason I like this is because I know the song Vanilla Twilight. Most people don't know anything more than Fireflies, though, so you either forced them to listen to it for comparison purposes or totally confused them. Here's to hoping that you did the former. :)

And I dunno, this pretty much follows the original line of the song. I see some vaguely amusing lines, but-for me, at least-there's no real humor in it. It shows that you were having fun with it, though, and it was an easy read, so that's really all that matters. :D

'til next,

CD 1.0

haha. cute. It was cool finding some of the lines from the actual song in your poem thingy. It was fun to read.

I can't really think of anything you might want to work on. It really was good. Keep it up!

Mind R&R my stories/poems? Thanks!