This chapter almost brought me tears. Good job XD This is probably the first story where I got so attached to a character in such a short amount of time. I will keep reading for sure 3

Remember me when you get famous. :)

Very nice.

Now, I'm slightly curious as to what would have happened but am really glad you updated. Good job!

This is really good; but only TWO reviews? This is a really interesting story and it's pretty unique.

One thing though; you need to be careful about what you have Claire say and think (when it's actually in direct words) because, to me, she only seems like she's no older than six and when she uses words like 'mesmerizing' and says things like 'gooey romantic stuff,' it can either sounds like she's a lot older or teen-like, you know? So just watch what you have her say and you should be perfectly fine :)

Oh, I also notice that you spelled 'took' like 'toke' but I think I only saw it twice so it's really not a big deal.

I'm really liking this and I hope you update soon! :D

Im Loving it so far!

Cant wait for the next chapter.

Intersting. I like it so far. Update soon:D:D