I'm not sure if I completely get this one, or maybe it's just that I'm not really "feeling" it, but I do like the title, whatever the case. Keep writing! :)

The wordplay is making me think. Why must you wrest me from my slumber? Gah!

Was this written about anyone in particular?

I love the way you applied the old aviator adage to angels' flight. "no time to truly/heal themselves, awkward angels/help others get by." You state that simple truth so beautifully. Thanks for the inspiratin of the day.

Love the concept and words like 'awkward' tagging along with angel imagery. :)