|Reviews for The Hurt of Pain|
| Ivriniel 12/24/04 . chapter 1
Beautiful poem. I like the message taht you convey in it.
| frostany 11/17/04 . chapter 1
wow! Really powerful, and hard hitting. It seems to me that in this poem you did an awesome job using words. This is a poem that really makes me think. I also have trouble with hurting myself, so I cna relate.
| Dragen Eyez 9/5/04 . chapter 1
Right on the money, as usual. Your repition really drives your point home.. I also love the slightly abstract feel of this.. it's not blunt or overbearing.. it's almost like that whisper that tells me "no" and "this is why you shouldn't do this"..
| Unheard-Screams 8/10/04 . chapter 1
I like this. it shows that no matter what you do, you will still have pain. read my poems? they are about the same thing.
| NoxOnexCares 4/26/04 . chapter 1
Wow. That was so real to me I could have written it. I totally relate.
| Ecka J Skittles 3/22/04 . chapter 1
Wow..I really like it even though it's sad. Course I only read sad poems. I don't cut or anything, I have my own other issues though that give me the same feeling. It's amazing how well words express pain, but how hard they are to get out. Great poem.
| AlleyKatGV 3/22/04 . chapter 1
Wow, this is like exactly the opposite of what I write a lot of the time. But I still like it a lot and think it could really reach and help people.
| D'Bryn 11/5/03 . chapter 1
This is really good. I'm a burner, and I feel the same way a lot of the time. Keep the faith and hang in there.
| hazelskyz 8/25/03 . chapter 1
I love this poem so much. I am a cutter, and this poem expresses exactly how I feel about my cutting. Thank you for writing this poem- it really touched me.
| HereIDreamtIWasAnArchitect 7/15/03 . chapter 1
wow. this is definitely good stuff. by the way, I'm the person who didnt sign in for the review of "goodbye"...theres prob more than one but oh well. i wanted you to know this review came from me. . I feel for ya, girl! and keep writing-all of your stuff is expressive and beautiful!
| Silent Dreamer 2/10/02 . chapter 1
wow. this is depressing and in a way i like it. it's very good.
| Lauren 2/7/02 . chapter 1
Wow...you summed up everything I feel every single day...I had no idea other people felt like me when they cut...cutting is great..I will never give it up...However much I want to...
| JenCarpeDiem 6/22/01 . chapter 1
That's really, really good. I love it.
| CM 5/14/01 . chapter 1
...Whoa. That's almost exactly what I've been feeling. It's really hard to talk to people, because one doesn't know how they'll react or what they'll think. And sometimes they think a person is being self-piteous...*cringes*
I don't mutilate myself, but I've been thinking about it (I'm too much of a coward). "Words can't explain how trapped you'll be," is making me re-think the whole thing.
| Black Angell 5/13/01 . chapter 1
Wow. you just spoke exactly what ive been feeling. but sometimes, its coz you want people to see that you hurt. to know that your in pain. and sometimes you can't find the words to explain it, and when you try, they dont understand. That is an awesome poem.