|Reviews for The Curse|
| dragonflydreamer 7/4/10 . chapter 2
I'm really confused, but possibly in a good way, depending on what happens next. Is Robin the person who was talking in the last chapter? Was she possessed or something?
Anyway, I like the writing in this. You break sentence structure and manipulate the punctuation well to make it really emotional and get your readers into Robin's state of mind.
This was really short, though. Is this like another prologue/introduction for this other character? With two short chapters to start off with, it's hard for me to sink my teeth into this.
| dragonflydreamer 7/4/10 . chapter 1
Interesting contest. I checked it out, but I don't really know if I have the time to participate. Good luck!
The premise sounds really interesting! The first thing that popped into my mind is "I Am Legend" because I'm currently reading it, haha. I honestly don't know where this is going, but I'm really interested in finding out!
Pretty good first chapter. A lot of stories start with a the main character nearly dying, but this wasn't bad. The dialogue really made it. Whoever's speaking is really cruel and heartless, and really has it in for this Eloisa. I wonder what got them to this point.
I'm a little confused with the mention on magic. Was he just taunting, or is there really magic in this?
You left me with a lot of questions, so I guess I'm gonna have to read on to find out!
(On another note: Ah, your rat is so cute! My boyfriend's sister has two and they're so adorable!)
| Emgem2000 6/27/10 . chapter 14
-Is freaked out-
Were the odd full stops in the Curse's speech purposeful?
Epness! I just getted my Proof Copy reviewed! Imma get it ordered!
| Emgem2000 6/27/10 . chapter 12
OMG, Beth, enable anonymous reviews! I hate logging in!
And, how the hell would you know? ;D
| suckishLEMONADE 6/26/10 . chapter 14
DUN DUN DDUN!
Awesome! That as for the last three shapters, BTW.
| The Jelly Bean Ninja 6/24/10 . chapter 11
Now you've got me interested. I can't wait to read the rest of this story.
I just might have to join that contest of yours (once I figure out how to reply in the forum...)
| Emgem2000 6/22/10 . chapter 11
Reply to your review reply: None. None at all...
Oh, my god, Beth. Annie giggled? She is has way fallen...
| Jiggy L. Morgan 6/21/10 . chapter 11
*Gasp!* Were is Nadia?
-Billy Bob Jonh strolls into the room-"Hey what's going on?"
Were have you been!
"Um... Italian class."
Billy Bob John were you on a date?
"No! Why would you say that?"
Fine, but you still need to answer those questions.
"Oh! Look at the time I am going to be later for German class!"
What? Billy Bob John, get your butt back here!
| xXLayaXx 6/20/10 . chapter 10
AMAZING STORY SO FAR!(: WOOT WOOT! Good luck with the contest!
| xXLayaXx 6/20/10 . chapter 2
O-O...**stuffs more popcorn in mouth** Must...read...more!
| xXLayaXx 6/20/10 . chapter 1
Clicking the next chapter button now... -
| Emgem2000 6/20/10 . chapter 10
-Snorks at Rose-
-Is generally confuzzled-
My reviews are epic, think you not?
| Emgem2000 6/20/10 . chapter 9
-AGrees with A/N-
| Emgem2000 6/20/10 . chapter 8
Beth! Get back from the good side! It's Canadia, remember! Even Safari agrees! And, Archery is one of the safest sports there is!
-Hides my 3 archery injuries-
| Emgem2000 6/20/10 . chapter 7
-Bursts out laughing-
(Nessie is a ninja)
(So is Bubbles)