|Reviews for You Waited For Me?|
| Ice Bubble 3/7/11 . chapter 1
Wah! Wah! :'(
| thewhimsicalbard 6/20/10 . chapter 1
Get rid of the explanation at the end. It ruins it, and it makes me feel that you assume I am stupid because I am a reader. I am not stupid, and I thoroughly enjoyed this little poem until you made me feel that way.
On a content note, the fact that you used a static rhyme scheme and managed to use it to augment your poetry is fantastic. Very few writers here have that ability. Keep it up.
| aby pwn u 6/16/10 . chapter 1
Whoa...thts deep :)
so sad :( Ilove how it means so much