|Reviews for there's a lack of color here|
| Lady Riss 6/15/10 . chapter 1
I liked it. :)
The red descriptions were amazing, and I liked the last stanza a lot too. :)
| Thenardier 6/14/10 . chapter 1
I loved this. I love the cryptic tone present here, the fascinating choice of words here. But most importantly, I love the images that you are able to conjure up. Beautifully written.
| Faithless Juliet 6/14/10 . chapter 1
There's a lot of childish wonder and vibe here, which I really liked, andingled with the sexualized undercurrents made the piece very vibrant for me.