I liked it. :)

The red descriptions were amazing, and I liked the last stanza a lot too. :)

I loved this. I love the cryptic tone present here, the fascinating choice of words here. But most importantly, I love the images that you are able to conjure up. Beautifully written.

There's a lot of childish wonder and vibe here, which I really liked, andingled with the sexualized undercurrents made the piece very vibrant for me.

Juliet.