its like an ashlee simpson song

I find this one really funny.

I like this poem so much...I don't know what to say, I'm sort of speechless.. Great poem, really well written.

This could really be a song, I like you're phrasing, the choice of the words, "hey everyone look", it really catches your attention. I also like the line "hey everyone look, I just took my own life." The words have a stinging truth, like a slap in the face.

That...is a very deep poem.. I always meant to go through your stuff at FP, but I only -just- got around to it, but I have no school tomorrow so I figured I could get away with doing nothing today (just like yesterday -_-') but yeah.. That's one of those poems I look at and think "damn, that's really how it is"

That...is a very deep poem.. I always meant to go through your stuff at FP, but I only -just- got around to it, but I have no school tomorrow so I figured I could get away with doing nothing today (just like yesterday -_-') but yeah.. That's one of those poems I look at and think "damn, that's really how it is"

the shadow behind the person. very intellectual. read my poems? they are about the same thing.

omg this is like my life story, well except that she sucessfully took away her own life, but good poem anyway

Yeah I know what its like..gotta always be everyone's best cuz they fucked up so you can't. Everything's piled on you until you can't take it and start looking for ways out...Great story..though it'd be a better song..

You've totally captivated how I feel everyday of my life...except I'm not really seen as perfect, people just always tell me how good i have it...again, very nice job. you're good at rhyming and giving your poems a certain rhythm.

Really kewl poem.

Its deep

I like it.

/-Kobrah-\

Wow... deep stuff. I like.

sounds like a song kno tons who can relate

heh heh, this sounds like the way i used to be! great peom. _

This reminds me of a girl I know. -)