you must be a master to be able to take an obscure but common truth and describe it so accurately and beatifully.

i know this feeling.

Hm... I'm not quite sure what to make of this. I like the general style of it, and it flows together really well, but I'm just not sure I get it. Maybe I'm just stupid and it's going over my head... I don't know. I did enjoy reading it; I just wish I knew what the moral of the story was.

In any case, nice work.