Please don't tell me you're discontinuing this. I love the characters, the idea and you said you already knew the chapter names. (Also I think I love Kool-Aid)

Yay! A new chapter! And it actually didn't take me forever to get around to reviewing this one! Anywhoo, so, onto reactins to this chapter :)

I'm a little worried about Kayden and Tiffani. I wonder why they haven't been talking very much lately :( Well, hopefully they'll get over whatever's going on between them and be able to enjoy the rest of the road trip!

And I like how you included the bit about Kayden quitting cigarettes :) I think it definitely adds depth to her character!

As always, Damien and Brad are adorbale! I LOVED the nice litle bit about them in the gas station ;) Hehe, what can I say :) I am so do everything in my power to tempt you to make a preuel about those two! I would love you FOREVER!

Alright, I'll stop begging, at least long enough to finish the review!

Last but not least, Koolaid :) Haha, she is, like, amazingly ditzy and random and just, and so reminds me of one of my friends, Lexi :) Except Lexi's short :) Hopefully she'll help to lighten up the mood since there seems to be a bit of tension between Tiffani and Kayden.

So yeah :) Loved the chapter, as always! And haha, I'm so totally like Kayden in the 'don't believe in superstition' thing, even when I know I'm just in denial :)

Can't wait for the Next chapter!

Bri :)

I offically love Koolaid! She is just so freakin hyper, I feel like running around just reading about her. I can't wait to listen to the new songs, but it's 10:21 and I was supposed to go to bed 21 minutes ago! Oh, and I'm a she! Can't wait for the next cooler than Koolaid chapter! ((That sounds really lame when you say that outloud))

Boo :)

I'm back! Loved the references to FOB and MCR! I'm in love with both of those bands, I don't care what anyone says about them! Is Lizz going to come into the picture anytime soon? I think it's great how Kayden and her are bff's yet total opposites at the same time! Anywhoo, just wanted to say I loved it and that it was awesome! Update soon!

Oh my gosh! I'm so sorry, I know it's taken me forever to get around to reviewing! But I'm here now!

So, omg! Damien and Brad super duper cuteness! I so wish we'd gotten a little sneak peak as to what they were up to before Kayden walked in, hehe ;)

Amber was absolutely adorable. Such a cute little girl! And it's sweet how Kayden played along with her! I wonder, is this the last we're going to see of Amber, or will she come back into the story later?

Anywhoo, loving it, especially the amazing randomeness! On to the next chapter!

Yay! An update!

I started listening to all the songs metioned, now I can't stop xD

Anyways, update as soon as you can!

Yay! An update

Amber seems awesome, she sounds a lot like my little cousin Arianna :)

Anyways, update as soon as you can!

I could not stop laughing! Update please!

I really like this story, please update soon!

AWW! THat was so sweet, the part when Bradley said it was a small price to pay for Damien! They're so cute together, but I definitely like Bradely in particular! He seems like such a sweetheart! Sigh. All the good ones are gay.

Anywhoo, hm. I'm quite worried about Kayden, especially seeing as the chapter ended all inferencing she has troubles back home and stuff. I can't wait to find out more about her, and I hope she finds a guy or girl to make her happy at some point too!

Panic! at the Disco is amazing! I love them! Oh, and starbucks, I'm pretty much addicted to their caramel frapuccino. It's, like, the only thing I ever get when I go there, just because its THAT good.

Alright, enough babbling. Now to talk about the actual chapter, hehe.

Loved it! And Damien, you poor boy! How have you never been to a starbucks! Where I live, theres practically one ever two blocks. Its freakin' ridiculous! And the parrot, hehehe, uber amazing randomeness! I don't care if the chapter was filler or not, it was still entertaining as hell!

Amazing super duper randomeness :) Hehehe.

And I empathize with Kayden. All my friends call me a faghag, cause' I always tend to fall for the gay ones. But c'mon, they're so freakin' hot!

Hehe. Anywho, loved this chapter. And the addition of the two gay guys. They'll definitely make things interesting! It's ,like, 3am, so I've gotta go before my mom wakes up and spazzes on me for being up at this hour, but I'll be back to read more later today :)

LOL! Great Beginning! Hehe, I love the randomness so far, very entertaining! Oh, and I'm with Kayden as far as 2am walks go, I'm so out walking that time of night/ morning(?) just for the hell of it, hehe. And I think you're doing wonderfully as far as writing it in first person goes. And I can definitely get a good feel for 'THe Band' so far, hehe. I'm eager to meet the members, hehe. Smexy time :)

its kind of random but funny, i like Kayden a lot :)

hey okay so when i read the description this morning when i woke up (which was one in the afternoon lol) i thought your MC name was Kayne West and i was like 'boo who'd write a story about that pooper scooper?' but was glad to have been wrong.

anywise I loved this first chapter and can't wait to move onto the next. the plot seems like it is going to be really interesting.

and yes you were right, Charlie is a greyhound. Well an Italian greyhound, but greyhound none the less :)